Please keep working.
This is one of the best "first flash ever"'s that I've seen. Please keep trying to expand your flash skills. I actually laughed out loud at the end just because I was impressed at how well a lot of it turned out. As far as the stick animation goes, please refer to http://www.stonesbucket.com to see what you could do to improve on that. It actually was not bad at all considering that it's your first flash. Also, work on transitioning. I know that flash makes you want to rush. It's sometimes really tedious. However, in order to create a truly visually-attractive flash experience, try watching some animations that are really good. They take their time on transitioning from one thing to the next. It keeps the animation from feeling "jumpy." I would recommend watching this:
for a really good example.
As for everything in the way of "ideas" and "originality," people are going to want more than just a stick fighting on a computer screen. In short, "it's been done before." A LOT. Everyone (or at least most everyone) eventually makes an animation like this, however, try to broaden your horizons next time. Try to make something TRULY original that NO ONE has thought of before.
Anyways, I personally think that you will be able to go far on Newgrounds and one day maybe even the Front Page. However, you'll have to work for it.
As of now, 3/5 6/10
Whoa, thank you very much for a long and great review! THANKS!
Looks like it will be great!
I'm not quite sure what's going on, but I'm sure that I will be looking out for these when they come out. Great animation; I liked the technique of putting the bars in front of everything else (made it look computer-esque). Also, the sprite at the end looked very good especially with the detailed background.
I liked this one even better! It was extremely smooth and had a funny plot to boot! The detail in this one was absolutely superb as well. The only thing I could possibly say was wrong was the sound... a little on the "tinny" side. Anyway, overall a great flash. I hope to see more.
Hey RoCapp! Thanks for watching and thanks for the crit!
Great game. You have put together the perfect combination of horror, great artwork, and superb storytelling. I have to say, I do not usually go for the genre, however, this one gets a ten. Also, to the reviewer below me, thank you for the Futurama reference. Hookers are the only thing that could make this any better.
Very creative. I had never thought of this before. It's making me laugh just playing it and dying on the next trap. Great job.
This game is more entertaining than some of the strategy games that I bought for fifty bucks. The graphics were very good for a Flash; the blood spatter is awesome! The best part of this game, however, is the way it makes you think. You must keep one step ahead of the aliens, make them walk as far as you can, and cut off the easy route. Great game! I hope to see a sequel!
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