RoCapp's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tetris kills]

Please keep working.

This is one of the best "first flash ever"'s that I've seen. Please keep trying to expand your flash skills. I actually laughed out loud at the end just because I was impressed at how well a lot of it turned out. As far as the stick animation goes, please refer to http://www.stonesbucket.com to see what you could do to improve on that. It actually was not bad at all considering that it's your first flash. Also, work on transitioning. I know that flash makes you want to rush. It's sometimes really tedious. However, in order to create a truly visually-attractive flash experience, try watching some animations that are really good. They take their time on transitioning from one thing to the next. It keeps the animation from feeling "jumpy." I would recommend watching this:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /430990

for a really good example.

As for everything in the way of "ideas" and "originality," people are going to want more than just a stick fighting on a computer screen. In short, "it's been done before." A LOT. Everyone (or at least most everyone) eventually makes an animation like this, however, try to broaden your horizons next time. Try to make something TRULY original that NO ONE has thought of before.

Anyways, I personally think that you will be able to go far on Newgrounds and one day maybe even the Front Page. However, you'll have to work for it.

As of now, 3/5 6/10

Assios responds:

Whoa, thank you very much for a long and great review! THANKS!

[Custodial Catastrophe]

Even better!

I liked this one even better! It was extremely smooth and had a funny plot to boot! The detail in this one was absolutely superb as well. The only thing I could possibly say was wrong was the sound... a little on the "tinny" side. Anyway, overall a great flash. I hope to see more.

VillainousTurtleSLC responds:

Hey RoCapp! Thanks for watching and thanks for the crit!

[The Dark Knight Tribute]

Thank you for that

Please don't try to attempt Turd of the Week again.

DeadMouseClock responds:

I got underdog actually ...

[Frame by Frame Creation]

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How did this get such high ratings and reviews? I have done WAY more complex Flash with WAY higher frame rates and they have gotten lower ratings than this... not that this is bad, it's just not nearly as good as what I have done.

Lucas4560 responds:

meh.. sqrew off

[Claydays: Head Spin]

Hmm.

I'm not familiar with the series and it is obvious that you were -cough-cough-ripping off-cough-cough- inspired by Knox. However, it was a really good rip off. REALLY GOOD. I laughed. Great job, keep ripping stuff off.

Lino responds:

Oh, another you ripped off knox reviews, eh? Well every one i get never tells me HOW I ripped off of him (witch i really can't see how), but thanks for the 8 anyways.

[!Computer Virus!]

Well..

Your animation of the computer was pretty good. However, if you had at least drawn a better person, I would have given this an eight. Why couldn't you use a laugh track or something for the guy at the computer? That would have also raised your score. Overall, it was pretty good. The animation was pretty smooth and it was obvious where you were going with the plot. Next time, put a tad more effort into the drawings and I'll give it much higher.

Masta12 responds:

i looked for one but not a good laugh